You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: •explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months •say how your work could be done while you are away •ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr Tandon I am inscribing the letter in order to raise a request for the transfer of my job location to head office. I have recently been informed by the Human Resources Department that there is a vacant post for a six-month project at the head office in India. I am very interested in taking up the role because it not only will allow me to visit my home country and live with my family but

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will give me exposure to the latest technology which we will be using in our upcoming projects. I am well aware that my absence may hamper the operations,

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, Ashish and Paras, both have come up for help and they agreed to take up the additional responsibility during my absence. Needless to say, they have proved many times their commitment to the work. It would be highly appreciable if you recommend my profile for the head office posting to the recruitment cell and help me in grabbing the opportunity. I am confident that working there will personally benefit me

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my enhanced skills will contribute to our team's success. Thanking you for all your consideration and support! Yours Sincerely Dhairya

dhairyamidha10Sun Jul 30 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

200 words

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