Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believes that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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certainly undeniable that the importance of schooling is essential in any stage of life. The benefits of learning are obvious as life has become easier and more convenient. A growing number of advocates state that

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continuing study after finishing college or university is the best way to become a gainer in life. ,

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the rest opposes it by saying that it

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to get involved in a job directly after school. Before coming to a reasoned conclusion, I will discuss both sides. On the one ,hand there could be a myriad of reasons why some people say that studying after college or university can make a difference to create a successful path for a career.

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with, students vast their knowledge in a specific field by studying in a higher education institute, leading to a professional job. A good example to explain

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is that every developed country like Japan, and China consist of their courses research-based after school. By

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when their youth continue their study after that they become practical based and professional.

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specialized in a specific field. Which will play a vital role in a society's development and the only way to obtain

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aim is through higher education.

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, inventing a cure for coronavirus would be impossible if its founders never studied after the academy.

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, taking a look at the flip side some might feel that it would be beneficial to start a job after closing academy. Academic qualifications are required in many professions.

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, it is impossible to become a doctor or a teacher without having a relevant degree.

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, no parents would trust teachers without having their professional qualifications no matter how experienced they are.

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reason, people looking to build their careers in the professions mentioned above. In conclusion, having explored both points of view, I think the importance of a university of education is determined by the career choices of people . Those who want to pursue their careers in business or computer programming are better off starting to work fresh out of

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or ones willing to become doctors or teachers should complete their relevant courses before their professional lives begin