Some people say that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that adverting is useful or just paying attention to it.
While
it is a commonly held belief that some
individual
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say that advertisement is exceptionally useful at
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us to
bought
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buy
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things
, there is
also
an argument that other people believe that advertising is more trending and
effectively
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to buy.
This
essay will analyse
this
topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On
one
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hand,
advertise
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is effective and useful to creating persuading for us to
buying
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things
.
In other words
,
the
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successful persuasion can be increased buy
things
and
engaged
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people to
taking
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this
product
due to
advertisement.
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,
this
always influenced
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to get him which must
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enhance aforethought
things
.
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,
utilise
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advertise
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advertising
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can be creating many funds, if there are using
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develop aforethought, they will make different
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about
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product
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other
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hand, advertising is more trending in many countries.
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had been
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for us. It is
also
possible to say that several businessmen
capable
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of do attention to people paying
things
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for things
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.
Moreover
, attention to doing
advertise
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advertising
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is essential
of
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for
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product
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products
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common in the world.
Although
developing and advanced countries have successfully
persuading
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us to buy
things
.
For instance
, if
famous
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a famous
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person
using
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uses
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this
product
for companies and making
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, they will be increased ripped
of
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paying
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and several fans of
this
famous person went to take
this
product
. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
question
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. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that advertising
significantly
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important for businessmen and companies. I think
that is
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an effectively
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effectively
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ways
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for him.
Also
can be engaged
individual
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to
having
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things
when they watched persuading. And it depends on the qualities of
product
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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