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With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, the number of people who opt for fast
food
 every day is growing,
nevertheless
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 everyone knows that for our healthy it is important to pay attention to what we drink and eat. I partially agree with the idea that we need to ban
fast
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fast-food
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food
 restaurants. There are
few
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 reasons to believe that fast
food
 should be closed. First of all, if a large number of people eating junk
food
 every day the costs of healthcare will increase.
In other words
, we will have more sick people, and governments and/or
population
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 must spend more money
for
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this
 essential aspect of our life.
On the other hand
, we can buy junk
food
, like sweets or sugary soft drinks, in a common grocery shop. If we want to be
consequently
, we should ban
this
 kind of item from every shop.
In addition
, I think that everyone is responsible for his/her health,
hence
 we should be free to take our decisions and how
lead
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 our lives. In conclusion, I believe that a general prohibition cannot be imposed, if the situation can be under control.
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