The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph gives a comparison of the yearly
income
of linguistic professionals in three main jobs, namely Interpreter, Translation, and Language teacher in five different
cities
in US dollars.
Overall
,
Mexico
gets the lowest earnings in three aspects, and Interpreter brings the highest
income
through
cities
. In
Mexico
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each language-related job gets an equal pay of around $19,000 and it is lower more than 3 times in comparison to other
cities
.
Whereas
Toronto and Munich gain an average of $70,000 making it 4 times bigger than
Mexico
. Of the three, Interpreter is the highest paid in Toronto and Munich with $80,000 and $75,000, respectively. Despite that
Translator
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Translators
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and Language
teacher
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teachers
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get similar pay in Toronto around $65,000 as the amount of payment of Translator in Munich. A notable figure is that the
income
from Language
teacher
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teachers
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in Paris is higher than double of
Mexico
,
however
, it is a bit lower in the other 4
cities
and the lowest
income
in Paris as it gets only $45,000.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, cities, mexico with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • languages-related jobs
  • US dollars
  • five cities
  • highest income
  • lowest income
  • average income
  • significantly higher
  • second highest
  • one-fourth
  • gradual increase
  • variations
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