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Many elderly are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages

#families #care #homes
Nowadays
people
 become more busy with their daily and office chores
such
 that they have no time to look after their parents. So many
people
 leave them or put them in old age
homes
.
However
, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do
this
. In
this
easay
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essay
, I will discuss some of the reasons why children put their elders in care
homes
. Let's begin by looking at the advantage of putting senior citizens in nursing
homes
 or care
homes
. One of the main positives of leaving them
to
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this
 kind of place is that
their
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they can get proper attention. What I mean by
this
 is that
people
 are very busy in their daily lives and they can't give
the
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their time to look at their parents. So
people
 take them to these kinds of places, where they can get the proper treatment if anything happens to them and they can enjoy themselves rather
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 alone in the home of their own house. Turning to the other side of the argument, elderly
people
 are the roots of the houses. To be more precise, the guidance and love of the elders are gone from the home,
due to
 which the
yung
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young
 generation suffers as they have no one to guide
and
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 tell
what
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 is right or wrong.
For instance
, if anything happens in the family so they are the ones to guide the younger generation
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 their experiences and if they remain there, the love and affection make the houses warm and protect us from all the difficulties. All things considered, overaged
people
 living in old age
homes
 is not a good idea. Personally, I believe that sending these
people
 there only
cause
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 a lot of problems in the family as there is no one to tell us what should we do and how we should love each other to make all the members of the family unite.
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