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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.
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population
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figures
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 for four countries for 2003 and projected
figures
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 for 2025 and 2050
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show
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 us the
population
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figures
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 and projected
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about
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 4 countries Argentina,
Indonesia
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, Italy and
Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea for 2003, 2025 and 2050, we can see the most
population
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 is
Indonesia
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 with 238
million
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 and
lowest
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 is Argentina with 34
mllion
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million
. In
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year
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 2003
Indonesia
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 is the most
population
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 with 238
million
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 in
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year
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 2003 and
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significant
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increased
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238
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million
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 in
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year
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 2003 to 312
million
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year
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 2050.
Republic
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The Republic
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 of Korea
have
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normal
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a normal
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 increase
48
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million
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 in
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year
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 2003 and 52
million
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in
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between 2025 to 2050. Italy
is decrease
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populaion
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population
 54
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 in
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year
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 2003 to 45
million
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year
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 2050 The
population
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figures
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 for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050 is increasing, most
is
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in
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Indonesia
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indonesia
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 and Italy is decreased
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, figures, indonesia, million, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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