The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

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4 countries Argentina,

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of Korea for 2003, 2025 and 2050, we can see the most

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2003

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2003 and

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2003 to 312

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2050.

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2003 and 52

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2003 to 45

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2050 The

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and Italy is decreased

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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

easily. In addition, the city is central to the state, trade, education and many sectors of the human being so society tends to find new experiences and broaden their horizon in the metropolitan which supports people’s capability at work.

Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion