The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph represents the
electricity
required for
electricity
in England during general days in winter and summer. The pie chart demonstrates what
electricity
is used for in the average English household.
Overall
, the demand for
electricity
in winter is huge,
while
that in summer is a small number. Most of the
electricity
is used for heating rooms and water. In winter, the required
electricity
starts at 35000
units
,
then
it fluctuates slightly to approximately 30000
units
at 6
o’clock
in the morning. Surprisingly, it continues to increase enormously to 40000
units
at 6
o’clock
in the evening. After that, the demand rose extremely to the peak at almost 50000
units
at 10
o’clock
at night. Unbelievable,
then
, it drops to 35000
units
at midnight. In summer, the
electricity
required starts at a small rate, accounting for about 16000
units
. It does not change a lot until 9
o’clock
in the morning. The demand slightly increased to 20000
units
at 1
o’clock
in the afternoon.
Then
, it decreased slightly, but it is still at the same rate at 10
o’clock
at night. After that, it dropped to 16000
units
, which is the same rate at first. Most of the
electricity
is used for heating rooms and water, accounting for 52.5 per cent. The number of
electricity
used for ovens, kettles washing machines is 17.5 per cent. The percentage of
electricity
used for lighting and vacuum cleaners is the same figure, accounting for 15 per cent.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, units, o’clock with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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