The diagram shows how coffee is produced from beans.

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us information about how

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coffee

coffe

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coffee

produced

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from

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this

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diagram

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about

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how

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coffee

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produced

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to everyone, in collect season

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season they will pix the

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coffee

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coffee

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they going to dry

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coffee

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with sunshine,

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they will roast the

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after that they going to cool them rapidly when they

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into the

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machine, they will grind them into beads After the five

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them with hot water,

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they will freeze the mixture

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will help them grind the mixture easily, next they grind the frozen liquid, near the final

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they bring them to

vaccum

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vacuum

machine and dry it, the water will be released, the final

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coffee

produce, after they dry it in a

vaccum

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machine they will take it and pack into jars. So

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information

give

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us about how

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coffee

coffe

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coffee

produced

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from

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, at we can see

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coffee

coffe

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coffee

produced

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The diagram shows how coffee is produced from beans.

Many employers believe that good social skills are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job, so they are employing people who are with good social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries has a positive affect; others say it could contribute to a loss of the country's identities. Do you agree or disagree

In most successful organisations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important, other people say that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centre or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?