Some people feel that governements should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools .Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A great number of individuals hold the view that a major portion of people’s

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should be taken for community services like schools and roads ,

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others assume that

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a bad idea. In my point of view , high

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in undeveloped countries could be a nightmare for citizens. On the one hand, it is commonly understood that high taxing is a kind of support

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economy. People , who support

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point care about life welfare for themselves and their children , which

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they just want to live in better conditions.

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, parents would like their children educated in a school of high range and

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they want to drive on the roads with good quality to have easy commit.

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, some consent that the state enforces a high amount of

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.

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, some believe that

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ratio of

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is an awful idea. Their opinion might

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two main reasons .

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, these humans think that the public facility has to be sponsored by big public factories or companies which have broad income

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annually

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significant outcomes by selling these products to

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and some of

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amount could use for public facility providers.

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, in underdeveloped countries, high

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may lead to the strongest demotivation of people . In

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will mostly suffer

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individuals

with medium and low income.

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,citizens try to find a way out

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and

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, it really gives a negative impact on the

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economy in

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run.

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,

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tax revenues are directly supporting the economy in one way , it should be considered whether

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of the country are capable or not.It means that

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should be depended on the national economic situation of a given locality.

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my view, high taxing should not be taken

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humans’ earnings. If the

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really needs financial support, it should tax much higher those who earn a lot.