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Some people feel that governements should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools .Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A great number of individuals hold the view that a major portion of people’s
earning
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 should be taken for community services like schools and roads ,
while
 others assume that
as
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is
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 a bad idea. In my point of view , high
taxes
 in undeveloped countries could be a nightmare for citizens. On the one hand, it is commonly understood that high taxing is a kind of support
country
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 economy. People , who support
this
 point care about life welfare for themselves and their children , which
mean
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 they just want to live in better conditions.
For example
, parents would like their children educated in a school of high range and
also
 they want to drive on the roads with good quality to have easy commit.
Hence
, some consent that the state enforces a high amount of
taxes
.
On the other hand
, some believe that
high
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 ratio of
taxes
 is an awful idea. Their opinion might
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with
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 two main reasons .
Firstly
, these humans think that the public facility has to be sponsored by big public factories or companies which have broad income
annualy
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annually
. To illustrate, the oil and gas factory
earn
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 significant outcomes by selling these products to
foreign
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 and some of
this
 amount could use for public facility providers.
Secondly
, in underdeveloped countries, high
taxes
 may lead to the strongest demotivation of people . In
this
case
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 will mostly suffer
individs
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individuals
 with medium and low income.
Consequently
,citizens try to find a way out
avoiding
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taxes
 and
thus
 , it really gives a negative impact on the
country
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country's
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 economy in
long
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 run.
To sum up
,
although
 tax revenues are directly supporting the economy in one way , it should be considered whether
locals
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 of the country are capable or not.It means that
taxes
 should be depended on the national economic situation of a given locality.
On
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 my view, high taxing should not be taken
all
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from all
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 humans’ earnings. If the
governement
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government
 really needs financial support, it should tax much higher those who earn a lot.
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