Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people still hold

belief

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the belief

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that attending tertiary path should be a priority way to be successful in

career

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their career

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path.

However

, there is an opinion that entering the

work force

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workforce

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right after high school is overweight the former.

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essay will discuss both prospective career paths and give

own

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opinion After

bachelor

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a bachelor

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degree’s holder, most

of

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apply

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people will choose

studying

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to study

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further

because

of

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apply

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it is standing a greater chance of landing a well-earned job.

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,

the

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apply

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academic knowledge not only

catch

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catches

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up with

working’s

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working

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speed when you take part in a new working environment

,

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apply

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but

also

gain you more chance to grasp your job.

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, in the first period,

dependent

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the dependent

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economy is a huge problem for

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the student

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student

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students

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. In

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,addiction

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addition

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addiction

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addition

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the quantities of paying for university is

increasing

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increasingly

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expensive, not including

living

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the living

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cost

On the other hand

, becoming more mature and independent is the most figure

of

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in

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getting a job right after high school option.

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, making new

friend

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friends

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or getting on well with

other

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others

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is a priority requirement to have more promotion opportunities.

Besides

, horning practical

skill

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skills

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help the

later

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latter

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be more confident to start up their own business. From my

view point

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viewpoint

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, they easily archive their target when they try as they can To summarize, I think that the best option is taking

the

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a

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gap year to find themselves and have more

experiences

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experience

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in

few

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a few

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working

year

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years

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and

then

turning

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turn

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in the university