Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to successful career, while other believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both view and give your opinions.

The majority of individuals

thinks

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that going to

university

or college is the best alternative to achieve a successful life,

while

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others argue that having a work

then

is a better choice. In my opinion, I totally believe that having

university

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education is very crucial,

however

, having a

job

is

also

a good choice. On the one hand, going to

university

is the best approach.

First

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reason is that there will be more opportunities for

who

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those who

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have

a good qualifications

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good qualifications

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. Take an example, having a good diploma or higher

degrees

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degree

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, you will be hunted by headhunters from popular companies which

then

you would stand a greater chance of landing a well-paid

job

. The second reason, it is worthwhile to get knowledge from

university

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or college which is the tool supporting almost

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your

works

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.

Furthermore

, many

people

say that “The more knowledge you get, the more opportunities you could gain.”. Indeed, graduating from a

university

where you will have many

advices

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advice

from experts so you would find it is more easily get a

job

from popular companies.

On the other hand

, getting a straight

job

after

school

also

have

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some benefits. Many

people

believe that having a

job

suddenly after

school

is better because they can earn money as soon as possible. Nowadays, many have

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an ideal

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ideal

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idea

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that going

further

after

school

is unnecessary and it is

also

more expensive so they prefer to

earning

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earn

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money suddenly after

school

.

However

, if they

want

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towant

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get more

many

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money

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, they have to work longs hour with a low salary

instead

of working in a friendly environment, working nine-to-five and having a high

paid

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. One more justification is that working after

school

is very fitting for whom want to get

a

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plenty of

experiences

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experience

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and soft skill,

therefore

, they can be

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at a

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a

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headquarter of the queue when applying for a position in the business.

To sum up

, working straight at 18 allows

people

have

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to have

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work

experiences

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experience

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and soft

skill

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skills

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when they

applying

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for

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a job

the job

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job

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jobs

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.

However

,

people

should make sure that gaining enough knowledge and specialist skills before applying

for

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apply

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in order to have a successful career and

also

a

dreaming

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life.