Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is

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belief that learning at

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university

or college is the best way to accomplish in career,

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others think

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a job straight after learning at school. And, my view on

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issue is that

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disagree with

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statement.

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with, when after school

student

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students

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should research

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learn at

university

or college

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because

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has a lot of advantages. Our

skillful

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can improve

in

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campus by

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and applying in practical situations.

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University

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have to take part in probationary employment and it is absolutely necessary to obtain a degree upon completion of the work in order to submit it to the school. At that point, one can

further

develop their life skills, learning, and working abilities within a collective environment.

On the other hand

, when getting

job

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a job

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early

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can make effectively our resetrictive.

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, working without

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knowledge

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make the headline for the boss becasue noone instuct our if our limited knowledge.

Finally

, when

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this

job, as

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work skills and

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foreign languages when necessary to communicate and converse with foreigners. In conclusion, it is evident that

we

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do not go to

university

and

instead

go straight

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work, there will be many disadvantages for us, and we may have to start very laboriously when working without having gone through

university

.