The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by seleting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

 Summarise the information by seleting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
two
maps display how
road
access to a city hospital had changed by 2010 compared with 2007.
Overall
, there had not been many changes made, except
two
new roundabouts, a new car park, and the replacement of the
bus
stops with a
bus
station. Surrounding the hospital was Ring
Road
, which was connected to City
Road
by Hospital
Road
. By 2010,
two
roundabouts had been added, at the junctions of Hospital
Road
and City
Road
respectively. There was a car park for staff and the public on the southeast side of Ring
Road
in 2007.
However
, by 2010, it had become a staff-only car park, and a new public one had been built on the east side of
this
road
.
Furthermore
, the
bus
stops on both sides of Hospital
Road
had been replaced by a large
bus
station with direct access to the
two
roundabouts.
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