The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The line graph demonstrates the percentage of people living in four different countries of Asia in the period 1970 to 2020,with predictions for the next 20 years.

Overall

,it is obvious that the percentage of the population in all the other cities climbed dramatically,

whereas

only the data of the populace living in Malaysia had

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a high peak. It is conspicuous that the number of people living in Malaysia was the most popular record among others in 1980 and

then

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figure increased after reaching just over 40 per cent in 1990.

On the contrary

,the population of the Philippines climbed just under 50 % in 1990,the number fluctuated until 2020

then

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data rose sharply reaching 50%. The picture shows that just over 10 percent of Indonesian people lived in the cities

whereas

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rate was just under 20 % for Thailand citizens.After that,the percentage shot up and prediction says that approximately 60% and 80% of these two nations will live in the cities by 2040.