The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
The line chart details shop termination and openings in a given nation between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, it is clear that
the sum of closed and opened shops decreased. But finally
, the number of shops that were closed was still higher.
A deep analysis of the line chart provided reveals the number of new stores started with 8500 stores while
the closures were only about 6200 in 2011. Over the next several years, openings considerably dropped to 4000 and gradually recovered to 6100 in 2014. On the other hand
, stoppages were more remain stable and reached the same level as openings.
Closures fell dramatically to 600 in 2015 before returning to minimal volatility and ending by 5100 in 2018. After 2014, the number of new shops in that country slightly go down and finish at 3000 in 2016.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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