The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of researsh funding allocated to each of those diseases.

The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of researsh funding allocated to each of those diseases.
The graphs show the number of people's deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990
as well as
the amount of money spent on medical experimentation for those illnesses.
Overall
, it is apparent that TB had been the most dangerous illness.
However
, the financial aid for its exploration was the lowest. At the outset, in 1990, Someland people mostly had been taken suffered from Tuberculosis, which caused about 1.8
million
people's death.
On the other hand
, death accidents had been noted for
the
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other kinds of diseases
such
as
,
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Aids, Leprosy, Tropical Diseases, Diarrhoea,
Malaria
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and Malaria
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(just between 0.1-0.5
million
).
Furthermore
, the funding support for
medical
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search had been dedicated to Aids, noticeably, with 180
millions
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and it is thrice more than
expense
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the expense
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which
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paid for
analysis
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the analysis
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of
Diarrhoe
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Diarrhoea
(60
million
) and Malaria (50
million
). At the same time, the same amount of money
used
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for
the
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expertise in
this
field.
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