The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of researsh funding allocated to each of those diseases.
The graphs show the number of people's deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990
as well as
the amount of money spent on medical experimentation for those illnesses.
Overall
, it is apparent that TB had been the most dangerous illness. However
, the financial aid for its exploration was the lowest.
At the outset, in 1990, Someland people mostly had been taken suffered from Tuberculosis, which caused about 1.8 million
people's death. On the other hand
, death accidents had been noted for the
other kinds of diseases Correct article usage
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such
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Malaria
(just between 0.1-0.5 Correct word choice
and Malaria
million
).
Furthermore
, the funding support for medical
search had been dedicated to Aids, noticeably, with 180 Add an article
the medical
millions
and it is thrice more than Change to singular
million
expense
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the expense
which
paid for Correct pronoun usage
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analysis
of Correct article usage
the analysis
Diarrhoe
(60 Correct your spelling
Diarrhoea
million
) and Malaria (50 million
). At the same time, the same amount of money used
for Add a missing verb
is used
the
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