The Graph Below Shows The Proportion Of Four Different Materials That Were Recycled From 1982 To 2010.

The Graph Below Shows The Proportion Of Four Different Materials That Were Recycled From 1982 To 2010.
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The graph illustrates the percentage of four items which were recycled in one country from 1982 to 2010.
Overall
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, the main trend of
this
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graph is an increase in items
such
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as glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics.
In contrast
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, paper and cardboard tend to go down. It can be concluded from the graph that the recycling
rate
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of glass containers began at 50% in 1892.
However
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, there was a slight decrease in 1990 at 40% and had a stable increase years later with the highest
rate
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being 60% in 2010.
In addition
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, both the items aluminium cans and plastics had an increase in the period from 1986 to 2010.
It is clear that
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aluminium cans were the only item that had a significant rise from approximately 5% to nearly 45% from 1986 to 2010.
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, plastics
also
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had a rise in their
rate
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but it was stable because of the slight rise in its data.
On the other hand
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, there was a variation in paper and cardboard rates. The recycling
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of paper and cardboard rose from over 60% to 80%
then
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declined to 70% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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