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revolutionized life and similarities are growing among countries since it is no longer an issue to have access to the same
from all over the world.
there are some drawbacks associated with the availability of all
from every part of the globe, I believe the main benefits are more substantial.
On one hand, a potential disadvantage of
accessibility may be losing the identity and culture in
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long run.
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a concern about the regional customs as these global
excessively influence a country.
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industry, most
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and local clothes are become vanishing these days since
tend to purchase designer clothes from
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different
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of the world. Another perceived negative
is that despite the hard efforts of workers, many small
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are going to bankrupt. Owing to globalized
,
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produced
have not been
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.
, small companies find it difficult to provide their employees with their
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, which leads to a slight increase in
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rate.
, a primary advantage of vanishing commercial limitations between countries is that
have access to the
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advancements. There was an improvement rift between the advanced and the third world countries which was not fair and
gives
a hand in many approaches. Medical equipment can be a case
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.
of being deprived, many
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of equipment. A
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is that from an
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of view,
not only leads to
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a huge impact on making more profit
exporting commodities, but
brings about more innovation and motivation so as to produce goods with a higher quality in a competitive market.
On balance, it is true that
would seem disadvantageous under certain circumstances.
, in my view,
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positive effects in terms of having access to modern equipment and earning more profit override the disadvantages.