The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the plan of the public library 20 years and how it became to be now. The main shape of the library was kept the same with no changes to its size of it, but all the
rooms
and places had changed and new facilities were added
as well as
the tables and chairs were removed, with new sofas added and a new bar as well. First of all, the library were including a number of 4
rooms
(CDs and gaming, Children's
books
, a reading
room
, an Enquiry desk)
in addition
to tables and chairs with adult fiction
books
and adult non-fiction
books
in the middle of it. By now the floor design has been changed which, the CDs
room
has been removed totally and replaced by storing events and children's fictions
books
with new sofas in the
rooms
, on the northern side on the right hand, the children's
books
rooms
have been replaced by lecture
room
, and the reading
room
on the left hand has been modernised to be a computer
room
, on the other ,hand the enquiry desk has been replaced with Cafe and self machines were found in front of new cafe has been established with the information desk in the middle and the door has been taken place for the cafe as well, and the storying
room
has become bigger with all reference
books
has been established in the middle in between of both
rooms
.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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