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Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, •Tell him/ her about your flat. • Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. • Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

#friend #apartment #vacation #•tell #instructions #case
Dear santi
i
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I
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 have four rooms in my flat.There is not
enought
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enough
 water in my flat and the rooms are very big you can sleep very well.You can use
new
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a new
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 bed sheet and towel.
Kitchen
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The kitchen
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 is
more
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apply
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stinky so you have to open
windows
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the windows
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while
 cooking.make sure rooms are clean.
Dont
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Don't
bing
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bring
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 any of your friends
in
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to
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 my flat.You are not allowed to smoke.I have many lights there so you can just turn on one.incase if food and
vegitables
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vegetables
 are finished they are in
fridge
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the fridge
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.Make sure
fridge
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the fridge
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 should be
turn
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turned
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 on at night time
otherwise
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 food will be damaged.You can call me any time and ask whatever you need.And always don't forget to lock
key
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the key
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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