Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after graduating from high school. Discuss both views an give your opinion.

Nowadays, many people claim that attending a place of

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education is the best way to achieve success in a career,

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others think that it is preferable to start work

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after

school

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writter

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is of the opinion that the former opinion is the best choice. First of all, the main reason that some people enter the workforce right after high

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job

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do not have enough money to study

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university

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. But

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option

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both advantages and disadvantages. When young adults left

school

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at 18 and

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a job, they can have more

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to deal with the public

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can improve

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their social

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skills, or students can make many new contacts that maybe bring a host of opportunities for them. On top of that, students can be financially independent,

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lessly

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use money from their parents, they

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can buy anything they want or that

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necessary

for themselves.

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, leaving

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at 18 and

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to

university

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or college have a variety of

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benefits

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as they would have more academic knowledge, it is very likely to stand a greater chance of landing a well-earned job.

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,

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in

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and college can make new friends that

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for social skills. In

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modern era, people need to

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develop

themselves to catch up

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progress of

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modernisation

, so

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apply

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it is crucial that students bachelor degree's

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. In conclusion, the most important

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that

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is

study

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to study

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, maybe

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going

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to

university

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not

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a

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best way

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success but

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the fast way to reach one. Learning is virtual for everyone.