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Some people tend to take temporary jobs (they only work for few month of year), for they have time to do other things. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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 a date when
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 are few and employers receive hundreds of resumes for
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 vacancy, temporary
office
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 are gaining popularity.
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 temporary
appointment
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appointments
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 have both advantages and disadvantages, the pros definitely outweigh the cons The main advantage
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 temporary
work
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 is that it is relatively easy to get. If the candidate's credentials match the temporary
job
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 requirements, he might be called upon to fill the position.
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, doing temporary
work
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 will give a candidate the much-needed
work
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experience
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. Most companies require two to three-year
experience
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, which puts recent graduates at a loss. Doing temporary
work
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 will give them that
experience
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. Another benefit of doing temporary
work
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 is that if a vacancy becomes available within the
company
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, the temporary
worker
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 will have first knowledge of it, and can apply before the
job
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 gets posted
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 or handed over to employment agencies. If a temporary
worker
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 excels in his current
job
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, chances are that he might be asked to stay on with the
company
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 on a full-
time
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 basis.
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, by going from
company
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 to
company
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, a temporary
worker
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 gets a lot of exposure. He doesn't just learn
one
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job
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 in the course of his employment he might gain
experience
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 in different fields.
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, by doing temporary
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, a
worker
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 will
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 be exposed to different kinds of environments.
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, a temporary
worker
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 will get exposure to different kinds of personalities. By learning to
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 with different kinds of people, a temporary
worker
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 can sharpen his people skills.
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 but not least, if a temporary
worker
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 needs some
time
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 off, he can just make himself unavailable for a
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, until he is ready to take on the next assignment.
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, there are some drawbacks of
temporary
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 career.
First,
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a temporary
job
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 does not have
job
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 security and
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 may be fired
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time
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.
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one
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also
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 does not get the perks and benefits that regular
full-
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full-time
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time
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 employees get.
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, there may be long gaps in
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's employment from
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 to
time
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. Summing up, the disadvantages of temporary jobs are far less than the advantages. For some people, a temporary operation is just temporary until they find something full-future,
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 for others it is a way of life.
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