There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Generally, parents search for the best

school

for their children in order to achieve great careers and a good life. Some of these feel that removing some academic subject are feasibility more focused on reaching the craved university.

This

essay will argue both sides and show why I totally disagree with

this

viewpoint.

Firstly

, some people believe that

school

must have only traditional

subjects

like maths, history, and science to ensure a better education without distraction. Indeed, teenagers are prone to

being

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distracted by social media and many personal activities, and

due to

avoid

this

, some parents prefer to

enroll

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them in schools that do not have extra

subjects

.

For instance

, some schools in Rio de Janeiro apply vocational tests in the first year of high

school

to ensure the correct choice for their student's future to select what class they could be to have excellent grades to do a federal exam to attend universities.

Therefore

, achieving good results is necessary; for

this

, the adolescent must have concentration.

On the other hand

, to build a better society, it is necessary to tie the educational system to families. For

this

, it is paramount to focus beyond the academic results to prepare a student for real life, and

school

could play an essential role in maintaining a tremendous psychological health environment.

For example

, more than half of Brazilian students were diagnosed with anxiety and stress, especially in the

last

years,

due to

the high pressure of schools. Some

subjects

help to improve personal skills,

such

as

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to their speaking and shyness issues, cooking, and physical education to their health knowledge.

Hence

, a non-academic subject could contribute to the balance of students' life and bring starling results. In summary,

this

essay approached the views of removing or not non-academic

subjects

.

Moreover

, the conclusion is that students will likely enhance and obtain success if they have stability and no undue stress or pressure.