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Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportions of three kinds of nutrients in four types of common meals, all of which may be harmful to health if consumed in large quantities.
Overall
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sodium
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 is consumed 43% in
dinner
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whereas
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 saturated fat is used 37% in
dinner
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.
However
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, added
sugar
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 is consumed in 42% of
snacks
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. So the most unhealthy meal is
dinner
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 where the two harmful nutrients are consumed in large quantities.
Breakfast
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 is the healthiest meal in which all three ingredients are consumed in fewer quantities,
sodium
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 14%, saturated fat 16% and added
sugar
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 16%. The consumption of
sodium
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 in
breakfast
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,
dinner
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,
lunch
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, and
snacks
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 are 14%, 43%, 29%, and 14% respectively. The usage of saturated fat in
breakfast
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,
dinner
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,
lunch
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, and
snacks
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 is 16%, 37%, 26%, and 21% respectively. The consumption of added
sugar
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 in
breakfast
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,
dinner
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,
lunch
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, and
snacks
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 is 16%, 23%, 19%, and 42% respectively. In ,
lunch
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sodium
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 is used only 14% but added
sugar
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 is used 42% which is 28% more as compared to
sodium
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, dinner, sugar, snacks, breakfast, lunch with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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