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Schools should teach their students how to survive financially. Do you agree or disagree?

#schools #students
In contemporary life,
schools
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scientific
subjects
 only, they have to teach some life skills.
Whereas
 some people believe that
finanical
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financial
 materials should not be learned in
schools
, I believe that
money
mangement
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management
subjects
 have uncountable advantages. In
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In
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 early
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ages
,
childerns
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children
 should understand that jobs might be
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choice
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 for some of
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. In fact, when they take the financial knowledge, they can
success
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 in business, so they have high income without going to work every single day.
Consequently
, they start to innovate
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efficient ideas to increase their income
,
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 and help the community.
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Furthermore
, students should face
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reality and knows value of the
money
.
For example
,
childrens
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 are wasting their
money
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 even though
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there
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 parents work
hardly
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 to get
the
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 salary
at the end
 of the month.
Schools
 contribute
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rising
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 the awareness of
money
 important. Contrary to what I believe, some individuals agree that
schools
 must focus
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the
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conventional
subjects
. As they send their
child's
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 to work
in
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the
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 academic objectives , forcing
theme
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them
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 to study extra
subjects
 will make them
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loss
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the
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focus
in
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main
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To conclude
, as long as the student
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 most of his time in
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school, he should have
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access to
variety
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 of co-
subjects
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 with skills and opportunity.
Co
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subjects
 should be a choice for some.
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