With increasing population and ever-growing urban centres, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

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Nowadays, we can see how many beauty spots are spoiled due ever-growing and increasing population. These places used to be clean spaces with marvellous landscapes where people did sightseeing but now they are crowded

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majority of the cases pollution is high.

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help of the government

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we could protect their natural beauty of them. When I was a child, ten years ago, I could go to the park and my mother always told me that we should throw the waste in the right place.

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, with the growing of people seems like nobody thinks

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others.

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, I can not believe that, because I am sure that with the measures necessary we will have everything under control.

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, the urban centres will lose their beauty increasingly.

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, when I travelled to Australia I could appreciate a tidy country, the centre never was really busy and we could drive in peace.

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is a model country and we should follow his example about as do an orderly site.

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, there are many signs to lead traffic and there is a main highway around the city that connects all the states. In summary, I am sure that the way to follow is to copy model countries and

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we will need to meet with the government to purpose our ideas

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we need all help possible. I hope to have a fast response from them and soon we will working to help the community.

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