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Cooking food is a waste of time in today’s hectic life. Fast food restaurant are helpful in modern living and it is less stressful. Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's era,
due to
 busy work schedules and other important jobs to be done in a timely manner, it is believed by some people that it will be better to eat from outside
instead
 of preparing cuisines at home. I partially agree with
this
 statement.
Although
 buying groceries , cooking meals and washing utensils consume a lot of days;
however
 eating fast food daily will
therefore
 deteriorate health. On one hand, the preparation of some maggot for either breakfast or dinner takes a large amount of life.
For instance
, making a butter chicken
along with
 some rice might grab around 2 to 3 hours which includes buying chicken, rice and other ingredients from the store and cooking at home. These types of worms require a heavy amount of pace.
Therefore
, to save some age it is better to buy from a restaurant.
On the other hand
, consuming daily from outside will have a negative impact on health.
For example
, a survey shows that people who eat fast food daily are more likely to get heart issues, and obesity and will have lower immune. These problems are only faced by people who eat at restaurants regularly.
To conclude
, it is better to get ready-made food from shops in order to not waste time on cooking.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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