Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about Explain what you would like to do to help Suggest how to gather more support for the cause Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear
sir
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/madam, I’m writing to you in
regards
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to the improper thrash
disposing
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issue that has been getting worse at Tracey Road residential area. I have been residing
at
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this
area for 7 years and it has always been a
closed knit
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community. Until lately, a few of the houses had new tenants moving in. The tenants are mostly youngsters who are still studying in college. They have not been disposing
their
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thrashes properly inside the dustbin rather just keeping
it
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outside of their house.
This
has attracted the stray animals to bite onto the thrashes and scattered all over the floor. Not only it makes the floor dirty but
also
stinks the area. The
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tried to communicate
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the youngsters in order to maintain
the
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society’s harmony but all to no avail. I am hereby writing to your newspaper in
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of some feasible solutions or
project
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to resolve
this
issue. Your assistance is highly appreciated. Kind Regards, Samantha
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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