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People have different expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, while others prefer to change jobs frequently. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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It is believed that serving the same organization for the rest of the
job
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 career is preferred by a few
people
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whereas
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 some other
people
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change
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 jobs from
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 to
time
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 as per expectations.I would discuss both sides
further
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 in
this
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 essay and mention my opinion in the conclusion.
Firstly
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,
people
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 prefer to serve the same
company
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 because of
satisfaction
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 with their
job
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 and salary.
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,having
job
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satisfaction
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 is even more important than having a
job
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 because a person suffers a lot of mental problems
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 as depression,anxiety and restlessness whenever he is not satisfied with his own work
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 unsatisfied
people
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 do not have good relationships with others
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 their anger issues.
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, with adequate money in which their every need is fulfilled
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 they do not have any need to lose their ideal
job
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 by taking the risk of changing a
job
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 so they prefer to serve only one
company
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.
However
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,
job
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satisfaction
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 and convenient salary are both important factors of a
job
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 so there is nothing wrong with serving one
company
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.
On the other hand
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,
people
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change
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 their jobs
due to
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 better opportunities and ideal jobs.
For example
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,when
people
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 have better
job
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 opportunities with higher ranks and more salaries they
change
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 their
job
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besides
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this
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 companies offer
job
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 packages with providing free world tour tickets, houses, cars, relief from medical and educational expenses
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 adequate salaries.Since
people
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also
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 want
job
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satisfaction
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 in their life so they
change
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 their
job
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 from
time
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 to
time
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 until they grab their ideal
job
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.
Whereas
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, everybody has a right to think about himself so
people
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 may
change
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 their
job
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 if they have any desire to.
To conclude
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, I think that it depends on the expectations of a person what he is expecting from his employer and
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whereas
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 both sides are right it must be their own choice to serve one
company
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 or
change
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 their
job
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 frequently.
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