The graph below Shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and two 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of shop Use synonyms
closures
and Use synonyms
openings
in one country in the period from 2011 to 2018.
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Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that the Linking Words
number
of shops that are closed is not stable at all, but the opening count is certainly having not so obvious changes throughout the period, Use synonyms
meanwhile
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,meanwhile
closures
mostly have a higher count, and Use synonyms
openings
kept the Use synonyms
number
of them changing minorly.
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Firstly
, from year 2011 to 2014, stores are closing with a relatively stable Linking Words
number
, hovering from 6,000 to 7,000 closing. But after 2014, it recorded a decrease that the Use synonyms
closures
actually met the lowest point, almost reaching only 1,000, a Use synonyms
number
that Use synonyms
openings
didn't reach anytime.Use synonyms
However
, after Linking Words
such
a decrease, it came back with it very high total of Linking Words
closures
in 2016 and remained stable at a Use synonyms
number
of around 5,000 closings.
Moving on to Use synonyms
openings
, the information from the graph shows that Use synonyms
openings
were having a start which decreased in the year from 2011 to 2012, making the statistic of opened shops drop from approximately 8,500 to 4,000. After that, they have a minor increase from 2012 to 2014, having the Use synonyms
openings
increase from 4,000 to 6,000, Use synonyms
then
again, the count is down to 4,000 in 2015 and from that time, opened shops keep changing stability.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, closures, openings with synonyms.
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