The graphs show the number of books borrowed from four village libraries

The graphs show the number of books borrowed from four village libraries
The line chart gives information about the
number
of
books
that have been borrowed from 4 different libraries in the village.
Overall
, it is noticeable that Ryeslip had the highest
number
from the start but in the
end
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Sutton Wood became the first. From the statistics, it can be inferred that both West Eaton and Church Mount experienced a rise in the
number
of
books
being borrowed from 50, in order West Eaton rise more rapidly when the
number
of Church Mount increased minimally
then
reached a common level of 150 in September. A deep analysis of the line chart provided reveals that the
number
of
books
borrowed at Ryeslip went down enormously from 300 in June to under 150 in September. At the same time, Sutton Wood recorded a sharp fall to 100
books
borrowed in July
then
stared
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to recover in August and reached
the
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peak of 300 in September.
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