Some people say that students who achieve the highest score in their exams should be rewarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Many people believe that the achievement for

students

in their high marks on the test should be appreciated by giving them rewards

while

others think that pupils with development in progress should be rewarded

instead

. In my opinion both the

students

with those conditions should be appreciated in their process to achieve good marks rather than only see the final score. In

this

essay, I will explain my opinions regarding those matters.

Firstly

, studying harder often put

students

from achieving a high grade on their exams.

This

means they do not have a good mark instantly.

For example

, in IELTS examinations, candidates usually spend about a year learning about

this

test in order to achieve high band scores. Indirectly, we do not only give a reward only with the results itself but

also

for the hard process in a year that they have taken to get high scores in IELTS.

Moreover

, good progress will

also

take to higher achievements. It is just a part of the

step

to

finally

achieving a good result.

For instance

, when the candidate for the IELTS test wants a good score in the writing section, the first

step

they may take would be how to avoid a mistake in grammar. When

this

kind of task is finished, they can go to the next

step

till they have a good result.

Thus

, it is worth giving them a present for their struggle in

step

to motivate them.

To sum up

, I would rather give a reward to

students

that have good progress

step

rather than see the final result only. It can motivate the

students

better

while

they are progressing in order to achieve good results in the future.