In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I strongly agree that as
children
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are becoming overweight and unhealthy the
government
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has the responsibility to solve
this
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problem
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. The below information describes to what extent I with agree
this
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.
Firstly
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,
as
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nowadays
the
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apply
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children
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are becoming overweight
as well as
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unhealthy
due to
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fast
food
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and junk
food
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.
Due to
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extra eating and too much eating
children
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face
this
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type of
problem
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. The
government
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should increase
tax
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the tax
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on junk
food
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so the
children
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prefer to eat more and more healthy
food
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.
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, the Nation should make
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rule
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a rule
the rule
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that
while
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going to
a
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institution the students should only eat healthy
food
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as well as
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eat
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eating
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vegetables.
However
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, just extra eating is
also
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a
problem
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but being more and more comfortable lifestyle is
also
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reason
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the reason
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for unhealthy.
Government
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should make
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rule
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a rule
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the
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that
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children
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should do more and more
exerices
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exercise
. The nation should
rule
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rule
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that
everyday
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there should be
an
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sports class for a student at the school and the institution should teach them yoga
also
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. The country should promote NGOs
who
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that
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are spreading awareness about
eat
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eating
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healthy and
stay
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staying
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healthy.
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, if
state
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the state
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will support NGOs
then
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it will be benefits
for
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both state and
public
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the public
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because young people are the person who will make the nation
growth
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and development.
To conclude
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, the above information
describe
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describes
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that
at
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to
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what extent I agree to
the
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it
even
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is even
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the governmnet
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governmnet
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government
responsibility to solve the
problem
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about
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of
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overweight and unhealthy
for
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apply
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children
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. If the
government
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will make some
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rule
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rules
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it
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apply
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the
problrm
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problem
can
be solve
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be solved
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easily and fast.
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