he displays graphs give data concerning samrtphone ownership concerning smartphone ownership as a percentage of population in a country from 2000 to 2010, and by level of education for the years 2000 and 2010.

he displays graphs give data concerning samrtphone ownership concerning smartphone ownership as a percentage of population in a country from 2000 to 2010, and by level of education for the years 2000 and 2010.
The displayed graphs give data concerning
smartphone
ownership
smartphone
ownership as a percentage of the population in a country from 2000 to 2010 and by the level of education for the years 2000 and 2010.
Smartphone
ownership from 2000 to 2010, in 2000 it is 40%, in 2002 it is less than 50%, in 2004 it was more than 50%, in 2006 it was nearly 60%, in 2008 it was around 75% and in 2010 it was 80%.
However
, in
smartphone
partnerships by education level, 2000 & 2010, In high school ,Graduates it was more than 30% in 2000 and in 2010 it was
also
more than 60%. In Batcherlor's ,Degree it was 60% in 2000 and in 2010 it was 80%. For the Master's ,degree it was 70% in 2000 and in 2010 it was more than 80%. For the Doctorate ,degree it was nearly 75% in 2000 and in 2010 it was 90%.
To conclude
, the above data describes the data given in the graphs.
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