The maps show the developments which took place in the coastal of town Laguna Beach between 1950, 1970 and 1990.

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The provided image illustrates the differences resulting in advancement over three certain years in the coastal of town Laguna Beach.

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, it can be seen that residential buildings were developed continuously,

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, the waterfront still remained in the south of the town.

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with, the track in 1950 had transformed into the road two decades later.

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, there is a significant feature, it is that woodland was destroyed and a caravan park was constructed in 1970. To be more detailed, shore huts had been remodelled into villas in the same period.

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, there are several improvements in 1970. Primarily, Vilas was reconstructed into hotels and sound dunes which existed same places for a long time, landscaped gardens had

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, the surf school is located on the coast next to the car park that was a caravan park 20 years before.

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, a pool had built between the hotel and the road.

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Do copyright laws limit creativity or reward it? Would society function better without such rules and regulations?

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?