The maps show the developments which took place in the coastal of town Laguna Beach between 1950, 1970 and 1990.

The maps show the developments which took place in the coastal of town Laguna Beach between 1950, 1970 and 1990.
The provided image illustrates the differences resulting in advancement over three certain years in the coastal of town Laguna Beach.
Overall
, it can be seen that residential buildings were developed continuously,
however
, the waterfront still remained in the south of the town.
To begin
with, the track in 1950 had transformed into the road two decades later.
On the other hand
, there is a significant feature, it is that woodland was destroyed and a caravan park was constructed in 1970. To be more detailed, shore huts had been remodelled into villas in the same period.
In addition
, there are several improvements in 1970. Primarily, Vilas was reconstructed into hotels and sound dunes which existed same places for a long time, landscaped gardens had
placed
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as well.
Furthermore
, the surf school is located on the coast next to the car park that was a caravan park 20 years before.
Besides
, a pool had built between the hotel and the road.
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