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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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A group of individuals present the view that travel and work in another country are the reasons that
people
 learn a foreign
language
,
whereas
 others believe there are many reasons in order to learn a
language
 apart from your mother tongue. I strongly agree with the latter opinion. On one hand, some
people
 justifiably believe that
people
 tend to learn new
languages
 so as to better development in their brains. From a medical viewpoint,
people
 who are willing to learn foreign
languages
 are less likely to suffer from a brain disease. Indeed, given the fact that
this
 ability is becoming a crucial skill in
this
 developed world, it enhances the brain’s function in every
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.
For instance
,
people
 who have been taught another
language
 are less likely to suffer from
Alzheimer
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.
As a result
, they do not forget something in their workplace and have better concentration which leads to
a
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significantly better performance.
On the other hand
, another group of
people
 argue that it is not necessary to know a new
language
 unless they require that for work or travel. They insist that
people
 who seeking for learning another speech will benefit from
this
 measurement in order to achieve the privilege of greater a job position.
However
, I do not find
this
 argument convincing as many
people
 are in prestigious positions without being
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 in
languages
, since they do not have
a
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communication with other countries. Despite the lack of need in
this
 group, the authorizes should raise
the
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public awareness about the positive impacts of knowing a foreign
language
. In a nutshell, in my
view
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 it is vital to be capable of knowing other
languages
 regardless of greater job opportunities or communication in travel.
This
 skill boosts the function and efficacy of
brain
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.
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