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You recently bought an electronic gadget for home purposes. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: What is this gadget What do you think about it Give advice about other alternatives your friend can buy

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Dear Kerat, I hope that you and your family are doing well. I have received your email recently
therefore
 I am writing
this
 letter to answer your inquiries regarding a
water
 filter I have bought. As you know the drinking
water
 of Canada is not directly drinkable.
Consequently
, I purchased
this
 gadget for $20.99 from Walmart.
This
 gadget contains a filter that purifies
water
 quickly without utilizing electricity. In my perspective,
this
 item is highly advantageous as I do not have to pay extra electrical bills, and
this
 enables me to use the
water
 for my entire family even if they wish to carry some
water
 outdoors.
However
, if you do not find it at any store or online
then
 there are certain other alternatives available. It would be great if you could buy distal
water
 bottles.
Also
, It would be really helpful if you might use charcoal to remove all contaminants from the
water
. I hope you would consider my advice, and please ask me if you have any other inquiries. Warm wishes, Rajwinder Kaur Brar
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