The chart below gives the information about how families in one country spend their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when they are relavant.

The chart below gives the information about how families in one country spend their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when they are relavant.
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This
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given graph provides some data about dissimilar ways that households intended to spend their wages in a particular country in two different years, 1968 and 2018 respectively.
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considerable amount of each family’s wage had been gone to supplying food in 1968 and the lowest fraction of their income had been allocated to
fuel
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and
power
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, the largest proportion of every week’s income allocated to leisure activities about 60 years later and the families spent the least part of it for providing
fuel
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and
power
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personal goods. In 1968,
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the largest part of families’ weekly expenditure had been spent on food, which was 30%, the least amount of money had been spent on
fuel
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and
power
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sources. Families’ costs for clothes and
footware
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footwear
and housing
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occupied the second rank at 10%.
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, other their weekly expenditure, namely transport, personal goods and leisure had been between 5% and 10%. In 2018,
household
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households
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spent the largest amount of their weekly income on the costs that they had in their free time and they
payed
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the smallest fraction of that for personal goods and
fuel
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and
power
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at about 4%.
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, housing and food placed in the second and third rank of
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category at about 22% and 17% respectively.
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