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student should spend time working begin studying university to what extent agree or disagree

#student #time #university
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pupil
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 need to take
time
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enroll
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 in
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university.
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 with
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one
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time
 that
one
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student
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students
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 can use to make themselves become
more
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better by the
way
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knowledge,
which
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 they have never known from school or from their teacher before. Example like some soft
skill
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, which can help them well
incommunication
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communication
.
moreoverThey
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moreover they
 will know to choose the best conclusion for
one
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problem
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 that they have to face with if they have enough
experiences
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 from what they used to learn.
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, by the
time
 they concentrate on work the most vital thing that they will be offered is an
experiences
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. Which they can use to
regconize
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recognize
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 at and what they
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 good at to have a conclusion for it. A simple
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effect
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 not only on their social networking but
also
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 the
way
 how
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they
thay
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they
 feel and
study
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time
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working
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 out. They will
started
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 to see that money is really vital and
also
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 to earn
due to
 they know the inner sanctum of
learn
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learning
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 and
study
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studying
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due to
 they spend more
time
 and become to
concentratre
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concentrate
 more on
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study
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studying
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.
One
 of
most
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 simple
way
 that a wide range of students have
past
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passed
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 and it
have
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 a lot of effects on the
way
 they
study
Conclusion
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 it can be seen that by the
time
 students are working out before they become
a university students
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a university student
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 is a good
time
 that
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they
thay
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them
 can get more
experiences
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experience
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 and have enough
time
 to
ready
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read
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 and repair for the higher education

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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