Many people think student should spend time working before university study. dicuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people think that

students

should spend time working before going to

university

.

Therefore

, in

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essay, I will look at two main reasons for whether or not to get a

job

before

college

. On the good

side

, the first reason

if

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students

have

job

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a job

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before

university

study,

students

can

will

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have

many

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knowledge

in

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their jobs. When

students

graduate

university

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from university

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, they have a good

job

with

high

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a high

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salary and have

stable

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life. The second reason, when

students

do

job

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the job

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, they can find and have many relationships in their

job

which help them in the future when they finish

university

. For

examples

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for two reasons, in Vietnam

majority

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the majority

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of

students

in

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here

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her

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work before

university

study because they

want

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won't

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have

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few

moneys

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amounts of money

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to help

their

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with their

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school

fee

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fees

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so they worked in small

restaurant

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restaurants

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or

store

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stores

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.

Besides

that, they still have a wide social and their relationships can have them in the future. On the bad

side

, when

students

have not yet gone to

university

but they have gone to work. They can not prepare knowledge for

university

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a university

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program which make them unstable in

the

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background knowledge. Because of that when they go to

college

, they can not absorb the lesson effectively and they may not understand the lesson and their grades will drop, worst of all they do not graduate from

college

. In conclusion, two

reason

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reasons

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with the good

side

and the bad

side

for

problem

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the problem

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about

students

should spend time working before

university

study and I think

students

should get a

job

before

go

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going

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to

college

is better.