The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares how much nitrogen emissions
produced
by four vehicles namely: Add a missing verb
are produced
diesel
cars
, petrol cars
, lorries
and buses
.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of buses
produced the highest amount of nitrogen oxide over the period shown while
diesel
cars
were the most environmentally-friendly type of vehicles. In addition
, lorries
and diesel
cars
witnessed a slight decrease in the period.
As can be seen from the chart, the amount of NO released by buses
was 40g/km
at 10 kph
. It decreased to 25g/km
when the buses
got faster at 60 kph
, before rising and reaching a peak at over 40g/km
at 120 speed. In addition
, lorries
created 32g/km
at the lowest speed. The figure for that kept dropping to nearly 20g/km
as the lorries
drove at 90 kph
and increased again 25
g/Change preposition
to 25
km
at 120 kph
.
Looking at the chart in more detail, petrol and diesel
cars
produced less emissions. The sum of nitrogen emissions emitted by diesel
cars
remained stable at 5g/km
at any speed.Similarly
, car
run on gasoline Fix the agreement mistake
cars
also
manufactured a steady total, which stood at 10g/km
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Vocabulary: Replace the words diesel, cars, lorries, buses, g, km, kph with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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