1.Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often said that governments should treat

healthcare

more seriously rather than other

areas

. Personally, I disagree with

this

opinion;

although

healthcare

may seem a sophisticated area, it is not really more important than other

areas

.

Healthcare

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needs to be cared about, but the

government

should not

put on

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the

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concentration

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on it and neglect

there

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other

areas

. One

such

area is

education

.

Education

is a key factor

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society’s quality.

For example

, in developing countries, a lack of

education

can result in high levels of poverty and unemployment. The most suitable example I believe is Africa. Most of the people who

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in Africa have not been educated in an appropriate way. It leads to an issue that people lack intellect and lose competition in the world. The contrast, in Japan, the

education

system

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is incredibly effective. Each inhabitant in Japan has a high quality and intelligence that could improve the whole nation to

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position.

Consequently

, The two ultimate examples can see how important

education

is.

On the other hand

, I believe

government

already works as hard as it can on

healthcare

. Medical equipment has been innovated dramatically, we can see by the average age of the population,

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elderly population is obviously higher than teenagers. Meanwhile, they have neglected other

areas

quite a bit.

For example

, Taiwan’s property prices have surged in the

last

two years. As I see, the prices certainly are being manipulated by either one humanity or an organization. It has been quite a

while

and I have not noticed the

government

makes any movement yet. Graduates who stepped into society in recent years are experiencing the strain that finances bring and I think it could be solved if the

government

has awareness. In conclusion,

it is clear that

health care is an essential human right and deserves importance. Ultimately, the key is to find a sustainable and equitable approach that benefits everyone.