A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.- Describe your point of view. - Say what you like about the show and why. - Ask the newspaper to take some action.

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Dear sir. As I am a fan of the TV program "Survivor", and with the latest complaint post of Mr Rone, the reporter of your newspaper, I want to mention some things that may concern you as the newspaper editor.

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, I believe that everyone's opinion is just an opinion. But writing out in a newspaper and claiming the production is a big deal. Consider your reporters' thoughts, and re-write the article with the advantages and disadvantages of that reality show. The public needs to read everything, even if it is good or bad. Don't give emphasise only the wrong side of things.

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, these reality shows concise the majority of young people. It is good for the youngest to know that even if they are not clever enough to study they can have an opportunity to get some money and have a career in show biz.

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, think of the two issues I mention and take your chance to make your articles more famous and your reporters more likely by the public. Thanks for your time. Sincerely Joah, Dept

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

180 words

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