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Nowadays, many people cannot read or write. What problems does this cause? What measures can governments take to solve these problems?

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Today, a number of people face a lack of paying attention in reading or writing something. It happens because of many factors
such
 as poverty and wealth. Perhaps, the government must be involved to tackle
this
 problem. One of the most
points
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 is poverty.
Parents
 always order their heirs to help with the family’s financial and economic aspects.
This
 leads their offspring to not take part in school society.
Second,
lack of awareness from parent become the number two factor.
Parents
 who
are believing
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 that the institution is not important will fail to teach their kids in reading and writing.
Besides
, in some countries, the rich are usually not taking care of their children to get to school and just follow the business their
parents
 do. Governments should act as intermediaries to handle
this
 issue. If
parents
 cannot get their scion to the academy, the government must help them
to provide
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by providing
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 free schools or courses that can teach those kids.
Then
, governments can work
together with
the
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apply
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volunteer
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 so youngsters
or
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apply
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adolescent or the public who have problems with money can improve their skills (reading &
writing
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and writing
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).
On the other hand
, the council can create something interesting to attract the community or the public to read or write.
This
 can be done with some contests
such
 as spelling, reading, writing, etc. In conclusion, there are many aspects that lead society cannot read or write, but those points can be handled by individuals or communities or maybe governments. There are a lot of programs created by the council
for bringing
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 the spirit to the public being attracted to reading and writing.
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