The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The two diagrams illustrate how
cement
and concrete are produced by adding some materials.
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Overall
, there are five stages for producing Linking Words
cement
that begins with passing the limestone and clay through a crusher and ending with packing Use synonyms
cement
into bags. Use synonyms
While
concrete production has a lesser extent stages.
Limestone and clay are blended and passed through the crusher to produce the Linking Words
powder
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Then
produced Linking Words
powder
is entered into a mixer. Next stage, the Use synonyms
powder
is heated by the heat Use synonyms
at the end
of the rotating heater cylinder and rotates. Before packing Linking Words
cement
into bags for distribution to the markets, the Use synonyms
powder
is passed on to the grinder to produce soft Use synonyms
cement
.
The right diagram shows that four materials are combined that the gravel has the biggest share among others with half of the share. Use synonyms
In addition
, water (10%), Linking Words
cement
(15%), sand (a quarter of all share), and gravel are mixed in a concrete mixer. Use synonyms
Next,
the concrete mixer rotates to produce fine concrete for building purposes.Linking Words
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