The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graph illustrates the quantities of goods transported in the United Kingdom using road, water,
rail
, and pipeline from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the figures for all modes of transport had increased in the period, except for
rail
transport which remained stable. In 1974, the
quantity
of roads was about 70
million
tonnes
, before it experienced a gradual decrease (at the same figure as the initial
quantity
), had increased to around 70
million
tonnes
. After 1982, it had a significant rise to nearly 100
million
tonnes
in 2002.
Furthermore
, the figure for the pipeline was almost 3
million
tonnes
and
then
it experienced a slight increase to about 5
million
tonnes
and after that it had a gradual rise between 1982 and 1990 before it remained stable with just over 20
million
tonnes
, it increased moderately from 18 to more than 20
million
tonnes
. The
quantity
of water and
rail
was the same in the first 4 years with approximately 40
million
tonnes
,
then
the figure for water increased considerably to around 55
million
tonnes
and remained stable between 1981 and 1994.
At the end
of 4 years, it experienced significant growth to over 60
million
tonnes
. From 1978 to 2002, the
quantity
of
rail
experienced fluctuations and
at the end
, it reached the same amount as beginning (around 40
million
tonnes
).
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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