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The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.

The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.
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The bar graph presents data on the amount of
water
 both in the forms of
ground
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groundwater
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water
 or supplied by the public used in 7 different sectors of a country's economy.
Overall
,
Ground
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Groundwater
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water
 is the main source of
water
 supply for
Fuel
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the Fuel
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, Metal, Chemicals, Paper, and Textiles
industry
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industries
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whereas
 the other 2 sectors (Foods/Drinks and Machinery) mainly consume public supply
water
. Starting from the industries which are in most parts relied on
ground
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groundwater
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water
. Chemicals use the highest amount of
ground
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groundwater
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water
 resources among the others with 430
millions
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million
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of
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cubic meters
while
 remaining
as
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the highest consumer of public supply
water
 with 240
millions
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million
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. With 240
millions
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million
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, Metal is the second highest consumer of
ground
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groundwater
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water
 with only 90
millions
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million
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of
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cubic
water
 in public supply usage.
Subsequently
,
Paper
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the Paper
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 business is in
the
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third place of
ground
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groundwater
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water
 consumption:
190
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with 190
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millions
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million
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 in
ground
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groundwater
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water
 usage compared to only 20
millions
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million
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 in public supply meaning that
Paper
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the Paper
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 industry has the highest gap between
ground
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groundwater
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water
 use and Public supply consumption. Textiles and Fuel are
consequtively
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consecutively
 at the next places with 80
millions
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million
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 of
ground
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groundwater
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water
 compared to 10
millions
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million
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 in public supply and 70
millions
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million
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 of
ground
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groundwater
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water
 compared to 10
millions
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million
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 in public supply, respectively. Turning to sectors with more usage of public supply, Food/Drinks consume 190
millions
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million
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water
 generate publicly and 110
millions
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million
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 of
ground
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groundwater
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water
 resources.
Finally
, Mechinary
consume
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consumes
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 100
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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cubic
water
 compared to 10
millions
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million
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 in
ground
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groundwater
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water
 resources.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, ground, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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