The bar chart gives information about the comparison of visitors going to distinct museums in London from June to October.

The bar graph provides information on the data of comparison of

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going to distance museums in London from June to October.

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, the British Museum has the highest rank

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and that's normal because of the home culture, in ,contrast the national gallery obviously has decreased but the history and the science gallery in June and July have approximately close proportions. in August the British Museum peaked above 600,000

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in October the national museum recorded fewer visitors on the data ,