The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.

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The chart illustrates 7 different factories that produce

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ground

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groundwater

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water

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and public supply in a state.

Overall

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ground

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groundwater

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water

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has a significant lead in most factories,

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food\drinks and machinery favouring public supply.Chemicals are being produced in large quantities compared to other companies.

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with, the least supplies being manufactured are Fuel, Textiles, and Machinery.With 70 fuels for

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ground

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groundwater

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water

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, 10 for public supply , 80 for Textiles in

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ground

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groundwater

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water

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,and a low 10 for public supply.

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, machinery unlike the other two has a massive 100 for public supply and a small 10 for

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ground

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groundwater

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water

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. Moving on to larger factories,chemicals, metal ,foods and drinks, and

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paper . Starting with the highest in production chemicals have a wild 430 for

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ground

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groundwater

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water

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also

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a 240 for public supply.Metal has a number of 240 for

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ground

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groundwater

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water

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, with a low 90 for public supply. Foods and drinks

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the other hand , have a larger 190 in public supply, to a quite close 110 to

ground

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water

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paper has a huge gap between

ground

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water

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and public supply with a 190 to 20 difference.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ground, water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

188 words

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Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agreee or disagree?

There are plans to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter say where you live describe the problem say why you do not want the development to take place

Some peolple believe that it is the best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsastisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaurs, dodos, etc.) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?